Documentary style sample I've edited recently. All visuals are done by me but audio and sound design is from the original video. What could I improve?

@RikoVMedia @ravi_abuvala I’d love to give you some advice on this but I don't have any sadly.

@RikoVMedia @ravi_abuvala Yeah

@OLucianP @ravi_abuvala Thanks G!

@RikoVMedia @ravi_abuvala Not really. To be honest I struggle with exactly the same thing.

@Anas_chanee @ravi_abuvala Thanks

Day 5 of road to $1k/month as a video editor -Landed a new client My current stats: -Monthly income: ~350$ -Clients: 3 -X followers: 292 Stats when I started: -Monthly income: ~110$ -Clients: 2 -X followers: 275 -Today's breakdown:

@EditorNelox Video sales letter - to pitch a service or a community in this case.

@cristianve8 Thanks G.

@AffanArfi44456 Thanks Bro.

@GamicaPixels @ravi_abuvala Thanks a lot bro🙏

@RikoVMedia Thanks man!

@AbdoAmr34 Definitely will! Thanks man.

@Itsaviedits Yeah, this is going to absolute banger.

@Lukas_Farkas_ In the best way. I'll definitely message you sometime.

@Lukas_Farkas_ We definitely need to talk and we've actually talked about you yesterday. I also didn't know you know each other.

@Rohiteditsvideo Oh, I didn't know that. I thought you can buy it straight away.

@Rohiteditsvideo That's awesome. I think it's definitely worth the money.

@Y_o_unes No problem G.

@Y_o_unes Pretty close then.